11.07.2007

in-class-free-write

if i could send a message
to every ten-year-old
boy,
girl,
i would tell them
that they are perfect as they are.
dont change for anyone.
i would tell them
to never give up,
to always have dreams.
i would tell them
that love, trust, honesty, loyalty:
they are a universal concept.
men,
women,
they all understand.
i would tell them the we have all wished on stars,
prayed away mistakes,
and fought our own wars.
i would tell them
dolls or trucks,
dress-up or war,
it really doesnt matter,
as long as we played.
but most of all,
i would tell them
that in the end
were really not all the different.

2 comments:

chlobola said...

i enjoy how this goes between boys and girls
(and then men and women)
i would maybe think about word choice and play around with some of the concepts.

the examples you pose are pretty interesting though.
fighting our own wars/
praying the mistakes away

pretty neat

Honey Bee's on Tuesday said...

AMEN TO THAT! I really like this and your title should so be universal message! i love it!